review my blog content!

i got a lots of good idea about theme and i am finding a good theme for my other blogs too but apart from theme/layout i want to ask for your idea on content of the site. This blog is related to teeth health

Here it is - teeth whitening

i have been working hard on blog creation and always ask for review here but i do not know yet about the concent of the site. How u guy thinks as a visitors? The content is created by hiring a man from US.

plz suggest if his writing is good and i should continue in using his service

 

it is nice website and u need to work on images and the free space in your site.

 

I tend to agree with Shabbir, the theme is exactly the same though that i was on the same site!
Ideas on my other review hold strong for this site.

If you want a full indepth review give me a shout and we can do an exchange.

 

Its Really Make Teeth White...

 

lol

 

The content looks good but you should try adding more and more content...as for the theme i think it is best you have kept a simple theme..but i wonder how are you monetizing it? i did not see any kind of advertisements on your site..

 

It takes to long to load the page.
Add some theme in it "it will white teeth's before customer comes to you"

 

Hey,

I think it's a very nice blog, it looks good!
Maybe try adding some more colours and titles to it so it's more attractive to read.

Now about the writing

Spelling: Good
Grammar: Punctuation needs work!
Writing style: It's okay for sure, but it looks like the writer speaks english in a funny accent. Anyway he delivers the message.

Hope my feedback was helpful,
Milan

 

your website is not open i have tried many times.

 

are you offering discounts?

 

its not working now. URL is giving issues.